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Erotic portrayals of sexuality

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'Qued' - (a dark or evil being)
Part of my 'Inspired' collection [link]
Model is my Muse; Pinkerbell :iconpinkerbell2:

This one is open to critique mainly as it's one of a new set of B&W processing techniques I'm playing with so I'm interested in feedback from folks about that, and the photo as a whole.

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Critique by *JanMurphyPhoto Jul 6, 2010, 2:23:32 PM
I love so much about this image. The pose is striking, the minimum clothing perfect, such elegant touches - superb down to the model looking to one side.

Ideal location, although it does make me turn my head to the right a little when viewing it. Could this be as the horizontals arn't quite straight or was this on purpose?

For me, although knowing that this is your style, I would have preferred the levels to be a tad brighter, although not much....

Fabulous work by you both, can see why she is your muse. Keep up the great work together.

Jan
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~Leila-Hazlett Nov 6, 2010  Professional Artist
very cool concept, I liked how you framed her.

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"I shot my love today, would you cry for me?"

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=MarkVarley May 7, 2011  Professional Photographer
Thank you :)

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:eager:Mark Varley
MarkVarleyPhoto.co.uk
"If I told you I was good, you might think I'm boasting,
if I told you I was no good, you would Know I was lying".
My Group: [link] Derelict Nudes.
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~footballcoach Jul 7, 2010
It goes to prove that even wearing a small amount of clothing doesn't mean you an't look presentable. She has a lovely presence and brings over the sentiment superbly
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=MarkVarley Jul 14, 2010  Professional Photographer
Thank you :)

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:eager:Mark Varley
MarkVarleyPhoto.co.uk
"If I told you I was good, you might think I'm boasting,
if I told you I was no good, you would Know I was lying".
My Group: [link] Derelict Nudes.
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`Unbearable-Lightness Jul 6, 2010
As Jan rightly said, this is an elegant, beautifully composed work of art. Congratulations, Mark, and great job, Jan!

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=MarkVarley Jul 14, 2010  Professional Photographer
Thank you :)

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:eager:Mark Varley
MarkVarleyPhoto.co.uk
"If I told you I was good, you might think I'm boasting,
if I told you I was no good, you would Know I was lying".
My Group: [link] Derelict Nudes.
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*JanMurphyPhoto Jul 4, 2010  Professional Photographer
I have tried to critique this work for 3 times now, but seems to be errors doing so.

Would you ilke it in the form of a message instead?

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=MarkVarley Jul 6, 2010  Professional Photographer
Thats irritating :-( note or comment is fine :-)

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:eager:Mark Varley
MarkVarleyPhoto.co.uk
"If I told you I was good, you might think I'm boasting,
if I told you I was no good, you would Know I was lying".
My Group: [link] Derelict Nudes.
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Mood: Optimism ~magspidy Jul 2, 2010
The picture is unique, I think it might benefit from being lightened up just a little, but don't get carried away. I would like to see some more pics of the same girl; she presents a very sophisticated look for a nude.

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We the unwilling lead by the unknowing have done so much with so little we are now capable to do almost anything with nothing at all.
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=MarkVarley Jul 6, 2010  Professional Photographer
Thank you :)
I will consider lightening this one.
There is more of this model :iconpinkerbell2: in my Muse gallery > [link]
and always more coming in the future :)

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:eager:Mark Varley
MarkVarleyPhoto.co.uk
"If I told you I was good, you might think I'm boasting,
if I told you I was no good, you would Know I was lying".
My Group: [link] Derelict Nudes.
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